Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Poetic Language: A Critic to True Love

After a long time I picked up the keys of keyboard to honor my blog.....This time although I take no serious thoughts to share. For the very first time I allowed my heart to win over the brain, for if its not so then I might not remain sane....This blog is encouraged from my friend's blog where I conversed with her about "True Love". I was told that true love is about surrender and submission, it is to be slave of the other. While she was in support of its existence, I remained a critic. Of course, the following words don't imply that I don't have a heart, its just the brain tries to act like the big brother of my heart knowing the heart to be weak and susceptible ...Hope it touches those who wish to know both sides of the coin, for without one the other can't exist...

To be a slave is to be low,
for even I am not a king..
Don't offer or submit to anyone,
don't shed that free wing....

Share your life with pride,
for even a slave can at times rise..
Let me know your true worth,
let me feel that you are wise....

No offer is more or less,
you are meant to share the reign
I give you back your freedom,
beside my throne you are to be seen....

Let there be no compromise,
for true love believes in it not...
It only sees love and respect,
the heart is never shot....

Love means not to loose,
it doesn't know "I" or "YOU"
It only knows about giving,
it knows to be true....

Love asks not,
Love demands none..
It only feels the presence,
it only bathes in the Sun....

For what I mean to say,
is that love is always mutual..
Don't surrender or submit to other,
Don't even go for a fierce dual....

True as you say,
the stream merges in ocean..
but no more it remains fresh & sweet,
no more it experiences its own motion....

To loose oneself in love,
is to mean subtraction..
But is that what love is about ??
'Cause completeness comes with addition....

Maintain your dignity,
keep to yourself your feel..
Only when you know the other,
then you open your seal....

Love's meaning is lost,
people think their own..
but universal love is that,
which by nature has been shown....

Blame you cannot,
nor be angry or sad..
You have to unconditionally obey,
even if the other is bad....

There still has been no example,
where true love has won..
No compromise-no separation,
where completeness has been shown....

I rest my case to you,
tell me if you know one..
And happy I shall be as much,
for my seal then can be undone....

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